- not very good. confusing. below average
- average. okay, not the best
- good. makes sence. people would like to read it.
Do you understand how I feel people! I'm really pissed off. I think I got at least a 2- 2.5. and the person who won, their story is just as good as my letter to the tooth fairy on my blog! People gave them like a 2.5-3. his name is Justyn Zeider.
Please comment and show me how you feel.
2 comments:
Kimmer,
You have to remember, people were not rating you, but your story. When I was a teacher, I would read student's stories, and what they thought made a lot of sense was hard for me to follow. I would ask them to go back through their paper and add A LOT of detail, so the story (or "movie") would be as clear to me as it was to them. I understand that you are angry, but it is helpful to know where others are confused. I would love you to put your pirate story on the blog so I can then use the rubric to tell you what I think. Also, was it your first or final draft? I apologize if your feelings were hurt in class. :(
Sounds to me like you might have a crush on Justyn. Ooooh la la!
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